Wednesday, May 4, 2011

Tiny Story

Jump over to ms Dianne Estrella's web page http://dianeestrella.com/ and see all the fun things she is up to.  This is an entry for a "micro fiction" written to the photo prompt that she has posted. 

"Ok, once again; Open the can of soup, pour it into the saucepan, add a cap of milk, set the stove-top  burner to med, place the pan on the flame and wait.  I will be home for dinner shortly."

11 comments:

  1. That sounds like me having to give my husband instructions on cooking. His answer is usually McDonalds.... :O)

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  2. Good one! I like her daughter's interpretation, too!

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  3. Very cute and clever Glenn! I have to work on my microfiction now :)

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  4. He must be talking to another male :)

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  5. Ha! My conversation (with daughter) went like this: "1st turn off the burner and cover the pan with a lid. Then open all of the windows to air out the smoke. I'm on my way home" True story!

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  6. My hub likes detailed instructions like this from me as he generally never cooks. Good one...I enjoyed it.

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  7. If the other person needs to be told, perhaps it's better to wait a little longer and demonstrate..!

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  8. Not sure this one is fiction! ;)

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  9. Sometimes it takes clear instructions..on days like 'those' (although this drill must be well worn!)..tiny but full to the brim of the story-tin..Jae

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  10. You really have a knack for getting it just right. I would have struggled for hours with that photo...and I suspect you simply wrote the first thing that occurred to you. And it was perfect.

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